Using Ning for Educational Social Networks
Student essay
Hi I'm Marissa this is my essay about school uniforms.
I would like feedback on my overall essay and my introduction
Also I would like to know how it sounds and how it flows =]
thanks! =)
I would like feedback on my overall essay and my introduction
Also I would like to know how it sounds and how it flows =]
thanks! =)
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Permalink Reply by Kathleen Edgar on -
I too was impressed by Marissa's organization and use of conventions. It's obvious she pays a lot of attention to detail and takes great pride in her work.
Kathleen
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Permalink Reply by Marissa Muñoz on -
Hi Ms. Johnson!
Thanks so much for the comments.
I was surprised that i got so much feedback lol.
I appreciate everything you said and everyone else said.
plus the constructive criticism is great for me too
i need all the help i can to become successful at writing =]
thanks ms., see you tomorrow!
Marissa
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Welcome to the community for those using Ning to power their educational social network. Also be sure to check out Classroom 2.0 for general discussions of Web 2.0 in the classroom.
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And have fun!
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And have fun!
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