Thank you for your feedback, Roger! I realize that I failed to mention audience and purpose. It is an area that I tend to neglect at times. I agree that "clarity" is a word that probably should be avoided. I chose to use it because the student used…
Roger,
I love how you started off your comments with a positive note. It is a great way to get the student in a good mood and more prepared to take any constructive criticism. I also like how you told him specifically what it is that needs work wit…
Jesse,
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your essay. You have fabulous ideas and the advertisement would catch anyone's interest. It is obvious that you did your research and you did it well.
For feedback:
Clarity: Your paper can use some extra work her…
Valerie,
I had dinner with a close friend last night, and in the course of conversation, Sunnsyside School District came up. We agreed that your district has something special going for it. You might not have all the technology you'd like, but clea…
Hedwig,
I turned down the job at Cat Foot last spring. I decided to take the job at Sunnyside instead. Do you like it there? Your way of responding to student work is similar to mine, however, much more time efficient. I like the idea of having the…
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